Paragraph #	What I think I’m doing	What my peers think I’m doing
1	Affirming	Affirming
2	Affirming/ starts to challenge	Affirming
3	Affirming	Affirming

 

Source Introduction: I think I did a fairly good job of introducing the texts. My peers suggested that I should address the themes within a narrative as I am about to talk about them. I introduce them at the very beginning and it causes the reader to go back and forth between different paragraphs if they are not familiar with the content.

 

Evidence: I really liked the evidence I chose, as did my peers. A few comments I received urged me to lead into the evidence more and allow for a better flow between their words and my words and allows me to connect ideas a little more readily.